Guest Vegna Fouroux Posted December 23, 2008 Share Posted December 23, 2008 Um well I got the urge to write something again it's a bit short right now but some feed back etc.. would be great!Thanks+ 24th of December, The Year of Our Lord 24601, 0300 hours, Somewhere in the Badnarik Mountains+ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keno Posted December 23, 2008 Share Posted December 23, 2008 Vegna Fouroux wrote:+ 24th of December, The Year of Our Lord 24601, 0300 hours, Somewhere in the Badnarik Mountains+ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mikael Khalamov Posted December 23, 2008 Share Posted December 23, 2008 Keno Pontoppidan wrote:vaguely spotting a naked dancing Keno on the horizon.Fixed.LOL.About the story: It's alright. One thing that bugs me though is the date. 24601? I highly doubt M4A1s, AK47s, G36s etc will be in use then. Should be more like... 2460. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest PADI321 Arida Posted December 23, 2008 Share Posted December 23, 2008 oh wow Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Venes Dagger Posted December 24, 2008 Share Posted December 24, 2008 Very nice. You should continue this. *nods nods* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Venes Dagger Posted December 24, 2008 Share Posted December 24, 2008 But isn't a flotilla a grouping of ships? Why would a grouping of ships have a specific name like Dauntless? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mikael Khalamov Posted December 24, 2008 Share Posted December 24, 2008 Needs moar SLSN bawwwing. And Steve not being able to talk properly to save his own life. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Vegna Fouroux Posted December 27, 2008 Share Posted December 27, 2008 well in operation barbarossa there were 3 army groups with specific names so here there's a flotilla with a specific name :othanks everyone much appreciated Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...